The thoughts are complete,
The rhymes are sublime.It’s how my mind capturesMoments in time.
This is first version and the one that popped into my head in one piece –
The thought’s complete,The rhyme sublime.A moment caughtIn just four lines
June 12, 2022
Nicely done 🙂 RR
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I like these.
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Great insight into your mind!
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Thanks!
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The first one, the second edited version, is better in my opinion but the second one, the first version, has its merits.
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Thank you. And thank you for making the trip over here.
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